complex work as hell the first picture reminds me of that scene from spiderman movie where he dropped her off after that festival or w/e nice touch adding the telephone lines as well
the balloon in the first piece is really nice give a nice feeling of a foreground. I think u could explore the room in the bottom piece more ...add more stuff, less pictures
I love these. I think the first two of your compositions are strong. The orange ballon is in your face and it's vibrant and obviously the focal point of your piece. The first one has a nice sense of balance and it seems to have a narrative to it. Very interesting. The second one Like the nice brick pattern on the buildings on the far left and I love how you chose to incorporate phone lines in the piece it makes it more dynamic and interesting to look at. I like the color choses and I like how not all of your buildings are not just solid cubes and you chose to add or take away parts of the cube to create some interesting forms for the building. Great job :)
yeah, the bottom two definitely stand out. the very bottom piece uses the perspective warp of images very well. the powerlines in the middle piece create movement with all the diagonals and is a nice touch
i like the ballon in your face--nice snapshot. who lost the ballon? did you lose the ballon? oh man it would have been funny cute if you keep the first one exactly the way it is then on the second one zoomed in where you would be on the ground looking at the house and there is a baby crying from losing his/her ballon. i guess it really doesn't have to be a baby(human) it could be anything crying. heheeheheh! the simple joys of life--how i love it and how i love your work. good job. amazing job!
Woah!! That ballon is a nice touch on the first one. The second one's detail is really nice.
ReplyDeletecomplex work as hell
ReplyDeletethe first picture reminds me of that scene from spiderman movie where he dropped her off after that festival or w/e
nice touch adding the telephone lines as well
POWERLINES!why didnti think of that!. solid work, cora. have you a future in illustrator? the highlights on that balloon are nice!
ReplyDeletethat baloonn is really cool and i really like your powerlines.maybe try to add more depth and detail to the first two.
ReplyDeleteThese are all very nice. I love the detail like the power lines, and the ballon. I love your little hut on the top of the building.
ReplyDeleteYour second one is really great! I love the detail put into every building and the power lines!
ReplyDeletethe balloon in the first piece is really nice give a nice feeling of a foreground. I think u could explore the room in the bottom piece more ...add more stuff, less pictures
ReplyDeleteI love these. I think the first two of your compositions are strong. The orange ballon is in your face and it's vibrant and obviously the focal point of your piece. The first one has a nice sense of balance and it seems to have a narrative to it. Very interesting. The second one Like the nice brick pattern on the buildings on the far left and I love how you chose to incorporate phone lines in the piece it makes it more dynamic and interesting to look at. I like the color choses and I like how not all of your buildings are not just solid cubes and you chose to add or take away parts of the cube to create some interesting forms for the building. Great job :)
ReplyDeleteI love the attention to detail you used, and the placement of objects.
ReplyDeleteyeah, the bottom two definitely stand out. the very bottom piece uses the perspective warp of images very well. the powerlines in the middle piece create movement with all the diagonals and is a nice touch
ReplyDeletei like the ballon in your face--nice snapshot. who lost the ballon? did you lose the ballon? oh man it would have been funny cute if you keep the first one exactly the way it is then on the second one zoomed in where you would be on the ground looking at the house and there is a baby crying from losing his/her ballon. i guess it really doesn't have to be a baby(human) it could be anything crying. heheeheheh! the simple joys of life--how i love it and how i love your work. good job. amazing job!
ReplyDeleteThe gradation on the walls of the second is done very well. I like the colors you chose as well.
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